Saturday, September 14, 2013

MY FAVORITE EXCERPT

My favorite scene in the book is when Nathan and Sally get together for their awkward dinner. I thought I'd put an excerpt here to entice those of you who haven't read the book yet, to go get it! I love the chemistry between them, even thought it's not lasting. This comes from my years of dating (unsuccessfully) before I met my husband. I don't ever plan on doing that again! Enjoy.....



Montovani’s was a small hole-in-the-wall establishment in downtown Regal, run by a local Italian family who was rumored to have Mafia ties, but Nathan just chalked that up to small-town boredom looking for drama. He found them to be honest, hard-working people who could make a lasagna to die for.

He arrived a few minutes before Sally, and secured a table near a street-side window. He considered sitting on the patio, but it was a humid evening, so he decided an indoor table was best. The tables were covered with traditional red and white checkered tablecloths and every chair in the restaurant seemed to be different, which gave the place a flea market look, but its eclectic style created a quaint, comfortable atmosphere. Nathan wasn’t much for fancy places and there weren’t any of those, as far as he knew, in Regal. A plump young dark-haired woman came by to take his drink order. Nathan ordered the house red. He knew nothing about wine, but he figured it wouldn’t look very sophisticated to Sally if he was sitting there with a beer.

Nathan looked up from the menu and saw Sally walk in and say a few words to the hostess, who directed her to Nathan’s table. He rose from his chair to greet her.

“Well, hello, Ms. Tate.” Nathan’s eyes lit up with approval. She was wearing a snug black skirt and satin blouse.

“Hello yourself Sheriff Davis,” Sally put out her hand to shake his. He took it into his and patted it with his left hand.

“You look stunning, I must say. And no need for the formal sheriff stuff. Nathan is fine with me.” He pulled out a chair for her to be seated next to him and helped her scoot it close to the table.

“Well, thank you…Nathan.” Sally hesitated as if the word was foreign to her. “This place is so cute. I wouldn’t have pegged you as the romantic type.” 

“Now, wait a minute…don’t go gettin’ any wild ideas about me. But I do have some class, especially when it comes to beautiful women.” His white smile stretched from ear to ear.

“Well, I’ll take that as a compliment,” Sally blushed a little as she picked up a menu. “What’s your favorite dish here?”

“Definitely the four-cheese lasagna. But I don’t think you can get a bad meal here – at least that’s what I hear. I always get the lasagna.” Nathan hated admitting his propensity for boring routines.

“I could have figured that about you. When ya find a good thing, stick with it. Why venture out, right?”

“I guess…I’m not sure if you think that’s a positive or not.” Nathan was peering over his reading glasses like an old man assessing his grandchild. With self-awareness, he pulled off his glasses and put the menu down, realizing he really had no need to look at it. 

“It wasn’t meant to be either one. I just think I know your type.” She was smiling playfully while reading the menu. 

“And what, pray tell, do you think my type is?”

She laid the menu down to answer his question without distraction.

“I would say Nathan Davis is a rule follower, a facilitator of justice, freedom and the American way. There is a right way and wrong way to do things, and once he knows what is right, there is no need to go looking for trouble. Just do the right thing and everybody will be the better for it.” 

She stopped to get his assessment and folded her hands in front of her in a confident gesture.

“Damn, girl,” Nathan joked. “You hit the nail on the head and aren’t you so proud to know it?”

“Yeah, well, you’re not that tough to figure out. It’s quite attractive, and even refreshing in some ways. You know…the protector and hero every girl wants to rescue her from life’s dragons.” 

“Sounds like there’s a history there, but I won’t ask you to reveal it just yet. So, wanna know what I think of Miss Tater Tot?”

“Jeez, Nathan, I wish you wouldn’t do that…it’s so…so countrified.”

“Yeah, and I’m a country boy,” Nathan began to laugh. “And I do it mostly because it annoys the heck out of you.”

“Okay, okay. I’m dying to know what you think you know about me.” Sally had picked up the menu again to look it over.

“Let’s see. Sally Tate is a country girl at heart, turned Atlanta jet-setter, who doesn’t like to be told how things really are. She likes to fantasize about how things could be. So, she gets offended by comments that aren’t so politically correct, even if they come from a hero like me.” He softened his voice for effect. “But deep down, she likes the safety of someone who tells the truth, even if it’s a little scary.” His eyes softened and as they did, she melted into them as she looked up from the menu. For a moment, she was silent, as if she had been undressed, hoping not to call attention to herself.

“How’d I do?” Nathan refused to take his eyes off of hers.

“Fair to midlin’…” She was not going to admit he was spot on.

“Fair to what?” Nathan looked confused.

“You know, fair to midling…so, so…almost there, but not quite. It’s a Midwest saying.”

“We don’t talk like that down here, Missy.” Nathan was exaggerating his southern accent, while letting her off the hook for not admitting he was right about her.

Sally laughed at his fake drawl, which was interrupted by the waitress who asked for her drink order.

“I’ll try the Malbec, thank you.” 

“Are you ready to order?” The waitress inquired politely.

“Give us a few minutes to chat over our wine first, if you don’t mind.” Nathan was enjoying Sally’s company and didn’t want to be bothered with the food details yet.

“Nice,” acknowledged Sally. “I had no idea you would know how to conduct yourself in such a chivalrous manner. You just took charge there, didn’t you?”

“I invited you, so it’s my party tonight.” 

“Okay, I’ll accept that.  Soooo, was there another reason we were meeting tonight or did you just want to harass me about my Midwest colloquialisms?” 

Nathan knew that was a trick question to get him to commit that this was either a date or a business meeting. He was not going to reveal himself that easily.

“My first goal was to tease and harass you about many things, which I’m not done with, by the way. And my second purpose was to pick your brain about Clyde Eddy.” 

“Well, there is a lot to tell. Have you got all night?” She didn’t seem to want the flirting to end.

Nathan cleared his throat on purpose, to let her know he wasn’t sure how to answer that question.

“Is that an invitation?” He felt like he had just achieved a checkmate. She was cornered now.

She began to respond with a look of sarcasm when Nathan’s cell phone rang with the ring tone he used for urgent calls. Sally stopped in mid-sentence when he looked down at his phone.

Nathan looked up at her. “I need to get this. Do you mind?”

“Of course not, go ahead.” Sally took another sip of her wine.

It was Tommy reporting that the lab was able to match Lance Eddy’s truck tires to the tire tracks at the scene and that the gun found in Eddy’s home was registered in Julia Olwen’s name.

“Ya don’t say,” Nathan responded with reserve in front of Sally, although he wanted to jump up and say hot damn! “Okay. Get the warrant and I’ll meet you at his place in about an hour.” Tommy then told Nathan that Eddy was at a family gathering at his mother’s home. “That complicates things a little,” Sally heard Nathan reply, “but we’ll figure it out. Thanks, Buddy.” Nathan ended the call, looking like the Cheshire cat.

Sally looked confused.

“Don’t tell me you are gonna cut out on me again. I’m starting to get a complex, Nathan Davis.” 

Nathan smiled like a ten-year-old on Christmas morning.

“Do you want an exclusive?”

“What?”

“Do you want first dibs on the story of the week?”

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